rewriting my life
with each snowfall
than the last
My favorite one so far, in making first pass. My, you really have this verse form in your heart stream, don’t you!
I certainly think so! The Japanese forms definitely agree with me. This being more of a tanka (disguised as a “small stone”), I would be inclined to make a silly comment, but these tiny poems do captivate my soul.
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