I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 10

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23 thoughts on “I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 10

  1. Cara Holman says:

    loop de loop
    another rainy
    Saturday night

  2. Yousei Hime says:

    with practice
    haiku improve
    paper planes

  3. terrilfrench says:

    wind shift
    an acceptance letter
    lands on my desk

  4. pat nelson says:

    blue moon
    launched in a paper rocket ship
    my X lover

  5. silver wings
    buoyed by the wispiest clouds –
    I fold my hands

  6. […] haiku is in response the doodle on Aubrie Cox’s Yay Words blog, Day #10. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this […]

  7. crushed petals
    sending him
    the last email

  8. paper planes
    fly in the classroom
    missing teacher

  9. sanjuktaa says:

    cluttered table–
    the last plane takes off
    in an inky dusk

  10. angie werren says:

    the ability to fly —
    all those words I thought
    I could write

  11. paper airplane
    none of the others
    meant to land either

  12. finally
    finding a use
    for paperwork

  13. Ashi says:

    idea after idea
    launched and crashed

  14. Peter Newton says:

    inside all day
    boys playing war
    with unmanned drones

  15. kvennarad says:

    minimalism –
    no comment

  16. kvennarad says:

    (coming after everyone has gone, scrolling down with my eyes shut…)

  17. forgetting
    our anniversary . . .
    petals closing

  18. I can’t help but try to shift away from the image (as with the verses in haiga and renku), yet also hope to resonate with it in some way. Hope that’s part of what you might be after, Aubrie, or maybe it doesn’t matter.

    • Aubrie Cox says:

      Michael, I feel like it doesn’t matter—it’s the resonances that I feel are more important. Basically, there’s just more wiggle room—than, say, in traditional haiga, which I’m a very strong advocate of the shift and breaking away from the visual half—to be closer to the image if people want, but don’t let that wiggle room hold you back!

  19. alee9 says:

    this grounded paper boat
    finally let fly

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