I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 11 March 12, 2012 A. C. Warnerdoodleku, haiga, I doodle you ku Like this:Like Loading... Related I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 11
back home- in the doorway the big black umbrella of my dad Sorry, Aubrie. Sorry, everybody! March 12, 2012 at 6:51 am Reply
My mom told my your friends don’t need it and your enemies won’t believe it! ❤ March 12, 2012 at 9:26 pm Reply
Glad this works for you, Pat I know I’ve written some questionable kus but hey we’re among friends and it’s doodleku after all time for fun –Peter March 12, 2012 at 12:19 pm Reply
well, i am certainly writing my share of lowbrow ku…. there is no “cyber dude in my life, nor have I launched an x lover in a paper rocket ship to the moon. all in fun 🙂 March 12, 2012 at 12:43 pm Reply
oops! deleting “until” would be better. sorry! i just noticed this now lol April 12, 2012 at 2:20 am Reply
[…] haiku are in response the doodle on Aubrie Cox’s Yay Words blog, Day #11. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this […] March 13, 2012 at 2:25 pm Reply
Hi Melissa, Lovely haiku. I think of poems writing themselves after loss, for example. March 14, 2012 at 6:48 am Reply
spring rain
mushrooms
spring up
unfolding umbrellas–
the meadow fills
with mushrooms
overnight
the backyard path whitens…
mushrooms
back home-
in the doorway
the big black
umbrella
of my dad
Sorry, Aubrie. Sorry, everybody!
Never apologize! ❤
My mom told my your friends don’t need it and your enemies won’t believe it! ❤
Merrill, thanks ❤ 🙂
Aubrie ❤
a walk in the woods
when I am feeling
small
i really relate to this haiku. nice one, peter!
Glad this works for you, Pat
I know I’ve written some questionable kus
but hey we’re among friends
and it’s doodleku after all
time for fun
–Peter
well, i am certainly writing my share of lowbrow ku….
there is no “cyber dude in my life, nor have I launched an x lover in a paper rocket ship to the moon. all in fun 🙂
mushroom moon
following the deer path
down to the creek
mushroom clouds…
until the big word
finally spring up
correction…
mushroom clouds…
until the big word
finally springs up
oops! deleting “until” would be better. sorry! i just noticed this now lol
pizza —
the puppy on my lap
like a caterpillar
where the deer come
down to the brook – pine needles
and mushrooms
something inside
feeling an urge
to spring up!
sudden rain
the crocuses close
mushrooms arise
[…] haiku are in response the doodle on Aubrie Cox’s Yay Words blog, Day #11. Like this:LikeBe the first to like this […]
to pooped to hop
a frog borrows
the toad’s stool
mushrooms —
so much whiter
after they’re broken
Hi Melissa, Lovely haiku. I think of poems writing themselves after loss, for example.
Oh my!
I kneel down
pretending to be Alice
smelling a hookah
and as they go
they write magic spells
over my lawn
pelting rain . . .
the dormouse
finding shelter
loam bed
the girl Alice awaits
for a dream