I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 15 March 15, 2012 A. C. Warnerdoodleku, haiga, I doodle you ku We’re halfway through! Newcomers always welcome; get the scoop here, and the rest of the doodles here. Like this:Like Loading... Related I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 15
Lovely Merrill. I remember a moment like this long ago in Illinois. It was autumn, no wind, and I watched a leaf fall. March 17, 2012 at 6:59 am Reply
Lovely, Tina . . . I’m enjoying visiting this wonderful playground with you! March 16, 2012 at 1:18 pm Reply
stripping of petals – melodies sway falling http://turnsofendearment.wordpress.com/2012/03/16/branches-of-notes/ March 16, 2012 at 9:08 am Reply
hmm I had the letters of “falling” staggering down, but it didn’t show up that way! March 16, 2012 at 2:56 pm Reply
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This is one of my favorite sketches so far. last year’s chime restrung– cherries bud after storms March 16, 2012 at 9:46 pm Reply
I love this sketch too. Beautiful haiku, Yousei. Healing, repair, renewal, spring. March 17, 2012 at 6:54 am Reply
water breaks
life forms
out of death
wind chimes
the rise and fall of cherry petals
fallen wind chime
the prairie full of sound
cherry blossom petals
the drifting notes
of the wind chime
lovely haiku!
Thanks, Christine! 🙂
petal fall
the only movement – even the wind
is still
Lovely Merrill. I remember a moment like this long ago in Illinois. It was autumn, no wind, and I watched a leaf fall.
wind chime
the soft touch
of cherry petals
White petals
and chimes,
evidence of things unseen.
I love your leap to “evidence of things unseen”
Thank you, Ellen.
wind chime
the gently swaying
of cherry petals
the chime of petals
falling
spring wind
Inari’s shrine each petal singing, singing
Lovely, Tina . . .
I’m enjoying visiting this wonderful playground with you!
Nice one, Tina! (I am going to quit calling you Christina! ; ) )
wind chime
mediator of Cherry tree
inner voice
how we spent
the cold, cold nights…
blossoms chime in
Revised:
how we spent
the cold,cold nights…
blossoms,too, chime in
long-ago pond wind chimes and song of the red-wings
stripping of
petals – melodies
sway falling
http://turnsofendearment.wordpress.com/2012/03/16/branches-of-notes/
tea house . . .
cherry blossoms falling
in my cup
Cherry blossoms
their weight leaves poets
silent
Petals
white rain
from blue sky
after the argument
the sound of petals
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hmm I had the letters of “falling” staggering down, but it didn’t show up that way!
Well, you had me “falling” following them down! 🙂
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This is one of my favorite sketches so far.
last year’s chime restrung–
cherries bud after storms
sounds delicious!
I love this sketch too. Beautiful haiku, Yousei. Healing, repair, renewal, spring.
open window —
all the sounds that never left
return
blossom rain
its no-sound
on the roof
a cheek
on your petal
spring in the air
pentatone and falling petals defy causality (without fail)
birth announcement . . .
a plum petal falls
into my open palm