I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 19

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24 thoughts on “I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 19

  1. Cara Holman says:

    up in smoke
    our old plan B
    becomes new plan A

  2. bouwebrouwer says:

    smoke mingles
    and dissolves –
    bar talk

  3. curling smoke
    she leads him straight
    to the bedroom

  4. Peter Newton says:

    neighborhood bar
    the old timer
    defends his position

  5. up in smoke his lungs

  6. sanjuktaa says:

    as if
    he’d be back in no time–
    the hat on the peg

  7. coming in
    from the rain
    everyone a stranger

  8. Kris Kennedy says:

    last drag,
    last swig,
    clear the throat,
    on to the show

  9. holding his hat my fingers tingle
    his energy remains

  10. a cigarette after
    another feather
    in his hat

  11. Grampa’s cigarettes:
    she’ll never admit to him
    she likes the smell

  12. Richard Cody says:

    Never seen again,
    he left only his hat
    and burning ash.

  13. alee9 says:

    somewhere
    a songbird distracts him
    the visiting uncle

  14. kvennarad says:

    also
    pushed aside –
    a chair

  15. narcissus in bloom . . .
    the gumshoe tells me
    I’ve been framed

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  17. Johnny Baranski says:

    rising smoke
    from another cigarette
    his stunted growth

  18. given up smoking
    even given up adventure
    life it’self?

  19. terrilfrench says:

    at the wake
    all the stories
    not under the hat

  20. hats getting smaller and smaller until the sky

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