I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 22 March 22, 2012 A. C. Warnerdoodleku, haiga, I doodle you ku Don’t forget to check out all the other doodles here, and to look into writing some fox and/or dream poems here! Like this:Like Loading... Related I Doodle, You ‘Ku – 22
rainbows fleeing on bubbles how daydreams go more airy than bubbles grownup dream balloons snapshot sinking in the distance children’s laughter March 23, 2012 at 12:27 pm Reply
Rewrite of #3 (to keep it within prompt) bubbles sinking in the distance children’s laughter March 23, 2012 at 12:56 pm Reply
Pop, pop, bubbles pop Glistening in the sunlight, My dreams still remain March 23, 2012 at 6:55 pm Reply
I love the life and wisdom in your haiku, Kris. “My dreams still remain.” Mine as well! March 24, 2012 at 8:12 am Reply
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Air blown through the wand Encased in a thin film Trapped and released March 24, 2012 at 12:23 am Reply
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The bubble bursts–
I however
remain whole
Beautiful bubbles,
here a moment and then gone,
like all of us.
vanishing dreams
a soap ring where
the bubble once was
growing, growing, POP!
if only it was that easy
childbirth
soap bubbles one spring afternoon,,,
contest–
the child’s bubbles
higher than mine
climbing to the sun
on a parade
of bubbles
rainbows
fleeing on bubbles
how daydreams go
more airy than bubbles
grownup dream balloons
snapshot
sinking in the distance
children’s laughter
Rewrite of #3 (to keep it within prompt)
bubbles
sinking in the distance
children’s laughter
.
crying over spilt milk bubbles
.
Pop, pop, bubbles pop
Glistening in the sunlight,
My dreams still remain
I love the life and wisdom in your haiku, Kris. “My dreams still remain.” Mine as well!
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Air blown through the wand
Encased in a thin film
Trapped and released
Hi mlissabeth,
Lovely haiku–a new thought for me, about the air.
children wave bubble wands rising suns
floating bubbles
the child in her
never left
revision:
floating bubbles…
a child’s laugh
in my laughter
rainbow bubbles
a child twirls
with a magic wand
soap bubbles
all the loopholes
that keep closing
outside recess —
the taste of soap
on our lips
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bubble blowing contest faster than anyone the wind
first date . . .
she surprises me
with soap bubbles