loved both of them…you always inspire me to write something too… this is what i came up with after reading yours. I don’t have a clue about the rules of Tanka. I just use yours as an example. I hope you don’t mind! and I would love to know if I break a major rule!! Thanks! for the inspiration
rain rushes
out the storm drain
when will
my memories
run out too
Sapna, I’m so glad that I can help provide some inspiration. 🙂 I love your tanka, and I’d say it definitely meets the expectations of the genre! It’s beautiful!
Yay Words! 
loved both of them…you always inspire me to write something too… this is what i came up with after reading yours. I don’t have a clue about the rules of Tanka. I just use yours as an example. I hope you don’t mind! and I would love to know if I break a major rule!! Thanks! for the inspiration
rain rushes
out the storm drain
when will
my memories
run out too
Sapna, I’m so glad that I can help provide some inspiration. 🙂 I love your tanka, and I’d say it definitely meets the expectations of the genre! It’s beautiful!