Doodleka [doodle – 05.18.12; tanka – 05.19.12]

the daughter
cooks today
on china where
pagodas and lakes
are fading

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7 thoughts on “Doodleka [doodle – 05.18.12; tanka – 05.19.12]

  1. snowbirdpress says:

    across the blue bridge
    the lovers fly into doves
    or stars in my peas

    ~~A lot of memories in this post of yours
    Also, thanks for the help…. I finally got WordPress to post the photo. Many thanks indeed.

    • Aubrie Cox says:

      egg drop soup
      a willow branch
      dips into blue

      —-
      Mostly definitely. For the both of us, it sounds like.

      And you’re welcome!

      • snowbirdpress says:

        Oh, How I loved that old willow-ware china when I was a child. All the stories I could imagine while I was eating …. you can’t get better than that, except ….when your daughter cooks for you…. now that’s about as good as it gets.

        • Aubrie Cox says:

          Merrill, that reminds me of whenever I was at my grandmother’s. She had a couple of the cork villages. I could stare into them for hours, as though the little cranes would come to life. I collect them now… picking one up whenever I find an older one (they’re much better crafted) for a good price.

  2. chris says:

    Snowbirdpress has expressed exactly what I thought when I read your tanka. I’ve nothing to add, except: lovely!

  3. kvennarad says:

    never have
    two blue birds
    and willow leaves
    made such a merry
    clattering

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