The concept is simple: HM doodles; you write a poem to accompany it. Links to all the doodles throughout the month and the opening post can be found here.
Doodle is by HM Yuan; please do not post the doodles on other blogs.
We’re now halfway through the month!
each raindrop
falls to the perfect center
a weighted touch
elevator ride
the sudden leap
of a dolphin
at her fingertips
a dolphin entering
a swelling sea
waves of desire spread
from a treasured pearl
between
the gutter and the stars …
I breathe in and out
a lone koi
kissing my hand
as I stir the stars
sundown
a violin cries the wind
slightly white
rippling
the morning light
snooze button
Memories of making out —
the LP’s grooves
summoning summer nights.
koi pond
a touch of autumn
in the breeze
[…] the He Doodles, You ‘Ku, on Aubrie Cox’s Yay Words […]
goldfish
making waves…
aquarium
party decorations
her rescue goldfish
no longer skittish
breathing in
and breathing out-
the chi
koi tattoo-
she dives into
the water
unaware of my
heart’s ripples
Revised version:
koi tattoo-
he dives into
the water
unaware of my
heart’s ripples
histerectomy
a koi-shaped space
beneath the ice
can’t seem to do without a typo… should be hysterectomy, of course
Good one !!
thanks, kash
shark shadows
beneath turquoise waters
her breath
rippling as she presses
deeper into his touch
correcting typo…
shark shadows
beneath turquoise water
her breath
rippling as she presses
deeper into his touch
summer’s cusp–
slipping into
your intimate space
or “your personal space?”
Terri, I prefer “intimate”. It’s more sensual.
another vote for “intimate”
glass pond –
the ripples I make
come back to me
in circles . . . koi
one hungry
one lonely
melted snow—
the missing stone
in a jigsaw puzzle
icy pool
doused in starlight…
jasmine blossoms
pressure-point
just the right touch
r e l e a s i n g
circling each other-
we search for
the right word