31 thoughts on “He Doodles, You ‘Ku – 23

    1. Thank you, Christina, Chrissi, and Polona. 🙂 Writing haiku is a hit or miss business, as you all know. Either I think up a haiku within 10 minutes, or it takes 24 hours!

      1. aloha Terri – I struggle with the’s too. I want my words to feel natural tho, as i would speak them. so I use the when it feels right. what about this:

        chilly river
        and cold
        he hums a tune
        and sings

        I hope you don’t mind that I’ve played with your words.

        1. oops. I apologize for the misspelling. I see your name should be terrilfrench. sometimes my iPad changes a word and I don’t catch it. in this case I think I did it all on my own.

          1. thanks, Rick I appreciate any and all comments. I used “the river is chilly and cold” because that is part of the lyrics of “Michael RoW Your Boat Ashore.” But not sure I like the extra the’s, even thought that is the way I guess I would have spoken it.

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