The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
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The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
New to doodleku? See the original post; you can also click here to keep track of each day.
last night’s argument…. her suitcase in the hall
always going
I never find you there–
autumn field
neat, organized, ordered in the way you say goodbye…so easy to ignore the mess you leave behind.
It’s only for the weekend,
right?
Lol…love this!
Good one!
work trip beginning a pile of dirty laundry
winging in
on the breeze
last year’s robins
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should I stay
should I leave …
a question mark
believing
he’s just away
on a trip
each fading sunset
brings me closer to him
another journey
another room
shadows on the wall
you don’t travel light
packing all your cold burdens –
how will you arrive?
flight into spring
I leave useless items
on the bed
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Rick Daddario
Kailua, Hawaii
USA
Early morning flight
Home away from home to pack
Clams stay in their shell!
lenten moon
shedding
what no longer fits
After last night
another dream
of traveling
traveling light years away from monogamy
clear spring sky –
i dance with the stars,
naked tonight
all that’s left of him
a battered brief case
and wire hangers
Scattered appendage,
of organized living,
missing uniting soul.
in the attic
clothes and suitcases
forgotten
the things he packed when we weren’t going anywhere summer’s end
I look for you,
the same as a needle
in a haystack
looks for her salvation.
I yearn for you,
the same as a year yearns
for her completeness.
I yearn for you,
the same as a year yearns
for her completion.
migrating bird-
two or three feathers left
on the window sill
his tiny seersucker shirt
perfect for any garden mouse party
he hopes they don’t notice —
he forgot to pack his shoes
lost horizons the tidiness of his untidy words