The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it! New to doodleku? See the original post; you can also click here to keep track of each day.
The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it! New to doodleku? See the original post; you can also click here to keep track of each day.
Fresh shoots,
I hear your lyrical flute,
souls connects.
rough dream-
several buds on the
broken limb
teach me flute…
to turn this kiss
into tones
a distant song
through bamboo leaves …
twilight dusk
bending
you’re teaching me
resilience
whistling spring cellophane wrap around the comb
oops . . . I meant to write:
whistling spring cellophane wrapped around her comb
well . . . I can’t seem to change this, but just pretend I said “wrapped,” and change “the” to “her” . . . .
small birds
between bamboo leaves
a spring melody
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http://www.rickdaddario.com/
Rick Daddario
Kailua, Hawaii
USA
easing up
on the pressure of my brush
sunlight on bamboo
[…] the I Doodle, You ‘Ku challenge, on Aubrie Cox’s Yay […]
the creaking
of the bamboo forest
hidden light
the strength of words
whispers through a windy draught
through tall bamboo
shakuhachi…
a word falls
into place
spring twilight . .
a flute’s voice teases
the colors
shooting star –
two parallel lives
collide
bamboo
invades…
many fences
speeding past
the bamboo grove
mockingbird trill
cracked joints
the discipline
of green bamboo
the way
you strum me…
wind through the bamboo
bamboo…
how to keep
an open heart
bamboo flute . . .
the memory of you
still haunts me
colorless thumbs
compost so many houseplants
lucky bamboo