Today is Forecast to Be Nearly the Same Temperature As Yesterday

You rarely write about sound. You explain there are two types of pain. You wonder if there are any other stories left in you.

cool after the rain…
mosquito larvae twist
in on themselves

6 thoughts on “Today is Forecast to Be Nearly the Same Temperature As Yesterday”

Symanntha Renn says:

Maybe we rarely write about sound because we have stopped hearing.

June 11, 2014 at 12:30 pm Reply
1. Aubrie Cox says:
  
  There’s probably a lot of truth to that.
  
  June 11, 2014 at 12:51 pm Reply
  1. kvennarad says:
    
    Maybe we rarely write about sound because we have never stopped hearing; sound being ever-present, it doesn’t occur to us to trap it in a moment. There is no sound of bat on ball – a brief concert that solves, dissolves, resolves into all.
    
    June 11, 2014 at 11:03 pm Reply
oldpondcomics says:

I like the image:

“mosquito larvae twist
in on themselves”

We often read the same image, over and over, in haiku.
It’s nice to see something new and original in a poem.

June 17, 2014 at 8:48 am Reply
1. Aubrie Cox says:
  
  I’ve been trying hard to find something new and fresh, though I’ve definitely caught myself sliding into some old habits here and there.
  
  June 17, 2014 at 11:14 pm Reply
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