Sporadic Flu Activity

The wildlife and apartment complex children have grown accustomed to you on your nightly walks.

You’ve gotten used to gravel in your sneakers.

fireflies before dark clouds moving in

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2 thoughts on “Sporadic Flu Activity

  1. Was it your intention for the haiku to be indented to the right?

    I kind of liked that! Just like the eyes ares searching the firefly in the night sky, the reader’s eyes had to look around in search of the haiku)

    But, also, more practically, I assume if the haiku was indented to the left, we might have confused it with the prose.

    • Aubrie Cox says:

      Yup, the right justification was intentional! Partly to distinguish it from the prose, but also that visual representation of things moving in—good eye on ya!

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