This is a temp version of the doodle from my phone. I’ll scan when I get home. My apologies for the lateness! Things should be more regular from here on out.
The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle, now write a poem to accompany it.
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Everyone seemed to like mobile version, so I’ll leave it up. Below is the scanned, unedited version.
playing
on the moon-
a prince
Visions–
You would have seen him clearer.
moonless…
the hare below in
deep meditation
another stab:
silent night…
connecting the dots
takes me nowhere
Nice one Anitha.
Thanks, Peggy Bilbro 🙂
the smell of snow stars
permit me to add that I love your pictures, especially this one.. it took me outside myself.. it is beyond words..thanks.
Thank you! And glad to have you on board for the month. 🙂
🙂
Temp versions
Of time—
This ear/ritating
relativity of now
*
(really, i love the temp mood of this mobile doodle!)
this long cold winter
with so much beauty
the beach the skies
all will change
to another beauty
solitude will be
replaced
for now
the deer and
rabbits
enjoy some meals
and views
alone
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I wrote this as a paragraph today and then played with the lines.
he follows my heart
through songs
as if like a rabbit
I will some day slip into
the whiteness of trees
pale moonlight the hare out of its hole
(Y)
I meant, thums up, Sanjuktaa 🙂
Thank you, Anitha and i love your connecting the dots 🙂
down the rabbit hole
to another place
searching for my buried escape
liked this one!
Aubrie, i love the doodle as it is, so charming…
here’s another oldie…
everything
we have in common
plum blossom rain
(The Heron’s Nest XIII.3)
Thanks, Polona!
far-off stars
if only he could fly
the rabbit wishes
no one told me
I couldn’t count
every star
🙂
last snowfall
I wish you both joy
in a text
green dawn the smell of fading stars
shock and awe-inspiring skies
twilight mist …
my breath pauses in the
twinkling of a star
good one…!
Thanks, Anitha!
love this one!
Thanks, Chrissi!
melting snow-
out of the burrow,
long ears
watching
the sky fall
peace by peace
I send an echo into
the air but — hush
hush
words swirl into silence like
snow
oh — changing the first “into” to “through”
I hit enter too quickly, once again.
Hi, Aubrie,
Joining the bandwagon ^_^
a longing
in her eyes even as
it’s time for bed . ..
to be out there with
the rabbit on the moon
i liked your drawing!
enjoyed this, Kala.
Thanks Anitha 🙂
Yay! Welcome aboard, Kala. 🙂
Yeah! Couldn’t resist not responding to your drawing. Sanjuktaa sent your link!!
stars melt
the dark of night
snowy sky
bunny stuff lookin’ up tails fallin’ oh
Another one:
moonset…
that hour when
I. too, am
left stranded
at earth’s edge
nice poems….this is interesting !
unsettled chores
hare chasing tortoise
moon clueless
this starry night
my desires hop from
one to another…
I close my eyes and
dream of all that isn’t
beautiful!
an old one……
silent cicadas –
wishes that drifted
beyond the stars
howls
piercing the silence…
rabbit moon
a whiff of hyacinth
by the grocery’s entrance
this cold winter night
I hop from aisle to aisle
thinking of spring
Lovely, Chrissi!
Thank you, Sanjuktaa! ❤
slow spin
through the late winter night
I listen to the universe
this snowflake
…and the next
velveteen
white rabbit
on white snow
deep winter
I like the shadow-yness of the first picture.
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I have found a poetry challenge by Aubrie Cox and have decided to post my poems today. This challenge runs throughout all of March- she puts up a doodle and you respond with a poem. Here is my response to day 3:
white rabbit
on white snow
deep winter