21 thoughts on “I Doodle, You ‘Ku 2014 – 11

  1. listen to the green
    the secret trees –
    one thousand gifts

    Each line is the title of a book.

    Listen To The Green by Luci Shaw
    The Secret Trees poems by Luci Shaw
    One Thousand Gifts by Ann Voskamp

    Both authors have websites, if someone wishes more information.

  2. I wake in four AM darkness. a walk through tall bamboo. the sound of unknown birds scattering before me. the scent of winter trailing each step. I slip deeper into sleep. a path of fallen origami cranes. these breadcrumbs into my dream.

    flight into spring
    each fold of an origami wing
    one step closer

    1. aloha Aubrie. my oops and an apology for posting this correction. I prefer to title haibun. where as I do not title haiku. I simply forgot to include the title with the previous comment post. below is the entire haibun (the body is the same) with the title:

      **

      Each Step into Spring

      I wake in four AM darkness. a walk through tall bamboo. the sound of unknown birds scattering before me. the scent of winter trailing each step. I slip deeper into sleep. a path of fallen origami cranes. these breadcrumbs into my dream.

      flight into spring
      each fold of an origami wing
      one step closer

      **

      thank you for hosting as well as drawing for your month of doodle ku. and as well for allowing my correction. aloha. rick.

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