The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
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The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
New to doodleku? See the original post; you can also click here to keep track of each day.
Between fire and pine
I slept like a babe
nice interpretation
the scent
of ponderosa pine
my childhood
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Rick Daddario
Kailua, Hawaii
USA
campfire embers
the stories we listened to
when we were children
love the layers in this. good job.
forest tent-
the hooting of owls
stirs the dark
I would
dream of this starlight
through pines
unexpectedly
your hand touches mine
towering firs
our own little corner
of the woods
starless night
my wish flees
on an ember
morning light
gathering the pines
a flock of doves
whoops! that should be:
morning light
gathering in the pines
a flock of doves
i like the surreality of the doves gathering pines in morning light.
Yes!
To me, the image feels larger and has more facets to it when you leave out the “in”
a night
in the woods
listening
my distant relatives
shining in the sky
at the height of fir the fall of darkness
w.o.w. brilliant.
Stunning!
Good one, Mel!
very nice
unravelling
stories of wild animals-
a campfire
camping out…
pine and tarp shaping
evening landscape
see also a recent pine post at my blog Lunch Break
morning after
an unfinished dream
brushing dawn
love this!
Thanks, Christine!
Stunning hokku!
Thanks, Rita!
fresh sun glaze
in my dreams, a weave
of pine needles
at the edge
of wilderness
i confront
the darkness
within myself
nice one, Lauren!
Thanks, Cara!
Beautiful!
Thank you, Rita!
expecting the Ahwahnee
no one told me
to bring a tent
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the encounter…
night forest sounds and
inner darkness
March 3(pressure)
inner darkness-
the encounter with
forest sounds
out of
embers
dawn
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night fire under open sky
star patterns
wood burning
the cycle of time
(…which now turned into a fire visual: http://bit.ly/XjgqU8 )
mountain breeze . . .
his feet warming
mine
tender mercies at the campfire burning piñon
rough whiskers
up against the tent
pine boughs
cool winter
touch with not nice
sneezy
between dark woods
and the dying fire
our little white tent
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abandoned tent –
the whirlwind
finally settles
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